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Lullaby of Silence

silence

comforts my soul

singing sweet melodies

lulling me into a dreamscape

REM repressions set free as dreams fly high

cheating all realities rules

delicious defiance

as I dream in

silence

In a list

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  • sunny day
    March 20, 2007
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    Thank you for the wonderful entry.


  • RhiannonMari
    March 20, 2007
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    short and sweet. i like it. *smiles*


  • Kari gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    This was so deep and touching. I loved it. It's short and beautiful. The best of luck to you in the contest!

  • sunny day
    March 19, 2007

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    To sleep, per chance to dream. A lover's dream so beautiful. I would wake to the sun shining with my love's arms wrapped around me. Thank you for the lovely dream you just gave to me with the imagery of your words so soft. Excellent rictameter that you entered for my contest. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • nell
    March 19, 2007

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    of this is just an awesome poem, it captures you from beginning to end and goes so well with the picture. good luck in the contest

    shanelle

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