Split my skin and let the pain in.
Part my senses and let the world scoop out their fill.
Feel scarlet run down my skin,
Pale from the pain I feel.
Blood runs thicker
So is better suited
To paint the walls of my prison.
A contest entry
- Sadness, Pain, Hurt by -Tears Of Pain-.
800 points, ended April 6, 2007, 14 entries
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wow - for so little lines that paints an awesome, and disturbing, image. you really ought to publish some of this stuff!
Split my skin and let the pain in.
That first line just caught my attention instantly, the way it's written is really good.
well done.
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