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Obituary

Black against white
I receive the message
Man made from dust
Only to one day return
Today was your day

Reading words so eloquent
Capturing some
Leaving others in the void
A poor example of existance
That misses many crucial points

Tears fall
Heart aches
The world goes on regardless

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I used the word obituary

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 22, 2007
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    I was hoping someone would take up the challenge of penning something for this word. I was glad to see you did. I think you have done a fine job here. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der