Silence...
deadly
yet beautiful.
Nothing
we hear nothing
emptiness
silence
the bare minimum
nowhere to grow.
We are deadly
silent
beautiful
and unwillingly empty
we are death in rare form
we are nothing.
Please tell me what you think
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nice!! this feels so true... deadly and nothing and empty, and it\s just right... I can really think of humans in this way, critical, just messing with everything... I enjoyed reading this. You've done a really good job, structure, flow. I like it!
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Thank you. =)
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Oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
*peers*
Muchos loving for this slightly abstract poem Madikins! I love the short, unpunctuated lines! Groovy for you. Yes, yes I said Groovy. Shoot me.
xxxx
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Groovy, foxy mama. :]
♥
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