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thirty words of hatred...

Vile bitterness, rotting a man's soul. 
Hatred's burn destroys all, that is his task. 
Putrid emissions of degradation, 
lie in caskets as a body's shell.


Hatred destroys life...

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hatred is the most vile of emotions.

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  • swanridur
    March 20, 2007
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    Great and sooooo true. I like your style


  • Blue Azure
    March 19, 2007
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    poisenously hateful write. fantastic use of words here.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    Yes, that hate certainly comes out in these four lines and thrity words- deep and dark and deadly. Sentiments well expressed.


  • CianLOVES
    March 19, 2007
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    I like this depiction of hate. Well done and good luck!