Subtle things you say,
(and the enunciation);
make me pause and think...
...Worry that something,
perhaps, no longer adds up.
A contest entry
- ... In 5lines or in 30 words ... by CianLOVES.
375 points, ended March 21, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
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Really like this very very much. I'm not a very good lier unless it's to really save my arse. Then I give an oscar worthy performance, it always amazes me!! Mostly though if someone looks me in the eye and asks a straight question I have to tell the truth. What about you? Thanks and good luck SR
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this is excellent, humbling in the sense that one wishes one could write like this, sigh~
captures the lie so well and is most spot on in each word used, short and eloquently so much truth wiithin, bravo on one fine piece!
good luck in the contest, this is, again, most excellent!
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I have been lied to and know exactly what you are saying. good luck in the contest. this is good observation
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WOW!!! and I'm not lying when I say you write
the truth my friend... if you're searching for truth listen for verbal nuances, they speak volumes.
Mr C, this is another amusing musing from your
masterful mind.
laurie.
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Wow I really like this poem, I especially like the use of punctuation. Well done and thanks for entering. CharliDARCY x
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this was pretty cool. great write. not much more to say about it. good luck in the contest.
DS
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