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love me (haiku)

trust me dream of me
touch me love me remember
me... reach out to me

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  • Blood-Wolf
    April 15, 2007

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    I know the emotion that is put across in this poem, even though its short (haiku) you have managed to capture love very well this is a wonderful poem great work


  • purplebubbles
    March 22, 2007

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    Short, cute and powerful.
    It's such a common feeling, love, but its so nice the way it can be expressed in so many diffrent words and ways. Its a lovely haiku!