I admire her as she sits across the room.
More beautiful than Spring flowers begining to bloom.
She looks at me every once and a while,
if I'm ever so lucky, I'll get a glimpse of her wonderous smile.
Her eyes bluer than a Summer sky,
with a body that, with it, she could have any guy.
Perfect, gorgeous and I wish I was the one she wants,
but with the never ending sexiness she only taunts.
She is the one I admire every minute of everyday,
wanting her to hear every word I have to say.
For now I'll watch her carefully and she'll throw me a glance,
maybe even more, let's just hope I get the chance.
I admire her... she's the one I want.
A contest entry
- Who You Admire by Kay Laon Anders.
1000 points, ended April 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Simple and affectionate, but I personally feel that for this contest, it's a bit superficial. I know how you are feeling, definately, it sounds like the life story of my high school life...
Anyway, best of luck. Zach.
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I like it =) its simple but it totally captures the way you feel, its perfect, really moving =)
Awesomeness keep it up =D -
Wow
That was a very moving poem about the one you love. Very well written. -
Nice
Moving and affectionate.....
KAY
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