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Ashes(Haynaku)

Ashes
What remains
When fire consumes

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Virgoan
    September 27, 2007

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    This is a beautiful haynaku. Logical and meaningful

    Thanks for sharing and keep on writing my friend.

    VIRGOAN


  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 22, 2007
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    I have just recently been introduced to this form and I find it rather delightful. There's no doubt that you have captured the essence of the word. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • wishintreeUK
    March 20, 2007
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    Interesting haiku, well done

    ~Katie~


  • nell
    March 19, 2007

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    wow this is the first time i have ever heard and read this form and love the extreme simplicity of it. nicely done. good luck in the contest

    Shanelle