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Kill me

You stuck me,
with your unbarible touch,
took me down,
killed me,
with your love,
you hurt me,
broke my heart,
I hate you,
go kill yourself,
look what you've done,
tore me appart,
now Im bruised by defeat,
I can't stand,
hurt and depressed,
I hate who I am

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  • xeroabyss II
    September 8

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    Yeah, that's the true face of love.
    Sharp, bitter and cold.
    All that other stuff in the beginning is just the devils charming smile as it conviences you to sell your soul.


  • Amethyst jean
    March 19, 2007
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    NICE!

    I love how it flows.nice.Good luck!

    *Amy*


  • bitter scarecrow
    March 19, 2007
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    short and sweet