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What's Killing Me!

Cacophobia,
Androphobia,
Achluophobia
and Erotophobia.
What I have is isolophobia,the fear of being alone.
My soul is drifting,
Through this graveyard of tears.
The essence of the devil is percolating,
Seeping into my fears.
Consumed by my own emptiness,
My friends I pushed away.
Confused by the world's carelessness,
I've found myself to stray.

My own path I've now forged,
Marked with trails of blood and roadblocks of betrayal,
Junctions of screams and sinkholes of broken dreams.
And I find myself still suffering from isolophobia,the fear of being alone.
Boys come in and out of my life,
One meaning less than the other.
Continuing to prolong my strife,
Cause there is always someone better.
So my fear I will have to face,
And pick my burdens up once more.
Trodding the path I've forged far from grace,
Cause I'm human and I need to be loved.......

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  • Snow White Queen
    May 22, 2008

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    Wow, I love this, is this the one that you said mine sounded like? Well I love this one, and thankyou.


  • Scorpus Noctem
    March 19, 2007

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    strong

    i agree with scarecrow, this is very powerful...it is riddled with strong images and potent words...
    'Junctions of screams and sinkholes of broken dreams.'
    Loved that part..great write


  • bitter scarecrow
    March 19, 2007
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    very powerful

    i love the meaning to it, the fear of being alone, a great pain, i like it.