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Ever Screaming in Vacuum ...

 

a shadow cast itself
                    within my outline,

 

to fill-out tracings of

duplicity - of depth
              (and colour)

 

 

                                  in physics
all movement chains itself
in inertia (including that of light)

why should people differ,
since they are made to
range the spectrum ...

                      I didn't -

 

 

the brighter the star,
the bolder the contrast
of eclipses and far-sides
of moons -

(and)

 

as the sun encompassing
my orbit, you arose
on every day

before you set,
that one last



time -

and I was then

all dark,

 

left only in

the company

 

of apologies and loss.

 

[I shouted both -

                      but the sound of me failed to carry

 

in the vacuum]

 

 


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  • poetryality silver member
    March 20, 2007

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    This is one of the most metaphorically sound writs I have read in quite a while. The consistent use of metaphor is stellar here. I understand the sentiments as well.

    "in physics
    all movement chains itself
    in inertia (including that of light)

    why should people differ,
    since they are made to
    range the spectrum ...

    I didn't -"


    These lines make all the sense in the world to me. They spill over with common sense and the understanding of human nature. Sometimes even apologies are not enough. Very well crafted.

    You are a contender!

    Thank you ever so much for this thought-provoking entry into my contest. I wish you the best!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee