I would have given up my life
For you
Would have given you the sun, moon, and earth
If you asked these things of me
Would have given up my happiness
For you
I wanted you to be with me
But, you sought comfort elsewhere
And that was good enough for me
Because to me, you where worth
Far more than life
Didn't realize that you were holding me back
From whom I am
Spend too more
Thinking when your mine
The happiness that we could claim
Was ours
But, it's too late
It's too late
To make things whole
There's nothing left for me
When the air gets cold
You'll soon remember
The future snow white queen
Author notes
Just about lost love and I guess taking it sometimes too far.
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wow. we write almost the same feelings.. i love the way the poem makes me visualize what has happen to u. i give u the best of my regards.
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Wow.(I always say that) I love it! I completey know the feeling, and I'm glad that you finally became yourself, which it sounds like he was preventing you from doing that.
I just loved it, cuz like I said, I can relate to it.
I love the last line: it's probably my favorite part of the whole poem.
Great write Trixie! Even got me to resurrect some memories I'd prefer to forget. Thanks a lot! (lol. jk)
~Jackie
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Hey,
Hey,
I love this poem,
And I can relate,
Great Write,
Sometime's I feel like I'm my own snow white queen -
I like it.
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Well done. Love is a difficult thing, but it always helps me to things into words. I love the last line. It's very strong and oozing with emotion. Nice job.
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That is very sad and many will relate best of love to you poet. Good write.
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