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prelude to our kiss

A flutter of the heart, catch of the breath,
Eyes closed with passion, standing on tiptoes.
A mind grows dizzy, body’s heated sin.
Thoughts are passed for longing and sweetened truth.
I’ve experienced Prelude to our kiss.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 22, 2007
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    MMMmmm... now this sounds delicious and yes, you did indeed capture the essence of the word. Those moments that build up to that final act can be sweet yet suspenseful. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • wishintreeUK
    March 20, 2007
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    The imagery is easy to follow here, well expressed prelude to a kiss.

    Well done

    ~Katie~