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This Rose

i give this rose to you, my dear
as a sign of my undying love
just a small token of my appreciation
for you being in my life, my love

this rose, the color of my cheeks
when i find myself around you
it's petals, soft as your skin
but it's no you

i give you this rose, my love
cherish it, hold it close
look at it when i'm not with you
for you're what i want the most

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  • bookbandit
    March 22, 2007
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    yay. *claps for car*


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    March 19, 2007

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    wow!! the title brought me in cuz i love roses! And im so glad i read it! its amazing!! i love the the petals are as soft as your skin part and the color of my cheeks! beautiful!
    MINDIE