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Love Him Hard

You hear him
telling you to relax
so as you do
he enters you
the two souls
come together as one
the new life
has just begun
he comes close
and just before you pop
he pulls out
and then it stops
he tells you he loves you
and you dont know what to say
cause you just love him hard
each and every day

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 20, 2007

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    this is in a way how true love is, you did a great job, this is a wonderful read a bit strong but still good, keep it flowing