Yore wurds ahr cuming ihn bluhrie
Eye dohnt uhnderstand wut yore saying
I got confused, I'm sorry
Yoo tryd too tehl mi wut yoo wahnted
buht yore mehsuges were lawst ihn tranzlayshun
ohr maybee eye whasnt lihssening cohrektlee
I'm sorry
Cahn yoo heer mi?
Ahr mye mehsuges dihstorted too?
Yoo cannot heer mi say
Eye luv yoo
Ahnd sew yoo wahcht mye akshuns
ahnd yoo got hurt
I'm sorry
Eyem behging yoo, leht us keep trying
Don't give up
Lissen too mi
Uhnderstand
I'm sorry
I love you
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Did you hear me?
Please tell me what you think
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Fantastic
I think you managed to show how people can't communicate with each other. very cleverly written! -
This made me laugh, it's kind of taking the piss... like... saying that you should have been able to understand... because we can understand the poem despite the huge spelling mistakes etc.
this is clever.
i like it.
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OMG
This is so amazing!!! I've never in my life seen anything like this!! I mean at first I wasn't even going to bother with it because I thought it was some sort of foreign language but the moment I looked twice I saw that there were hidden messages!! Brilliant!! I honestly love it!! I commend you on this peice!! Great job!! I hope to see more like this from you!! Peace out..
Gin
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thanks so much for the nice comment. you know, i was afraid that people wouldn't get this. i'm so glad you did and that you thought it was cool.
glad you liked!!
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