There once was a time where they were both lost on a journey without a destiny. Wondering freely to where their love was always prohibited. Sailing through the seas of passion. Not even the fiercest wave could pull them apart. But now they have found themselves in the reality of the world. Where their love was torn apart by the ignorance of a woman who didn't want to believe that love has no limits. Not even taking a second out of the day to try to understand who she truly was. I know one day the tides of the ocean will bring them back together. Leading them to a place where they can continue their journey. But this time they know what their destiny is supposed to be...Loving each other until the end of time.
Author notes
it's kind of a response to a song that i've once heard
A contest entry
- A Girlfriend for a Girl by suzume.
500 points, ended April 7, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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this is good. very interesting.
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Pretty sad. It makes me think of some more urban story being narrated over by someone from a fairy tale.
I got a little confused, not quite understanding the reason they were torn apart. I think I get it, but it might do with a bit more clarification.
Not many people still write prose poetry. Nice detour.
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GREAT
this is a great poem gurl. so who is it sopose to tell a story about? you can just tell me in school. lol great job
Luv Ya
MixedChic706
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