this non-hunger eats,
drains the insides while pouring
putrid thoughts, hollow, though pipelines.
consuming, it wears away and ingests sunlight,
hoping to rid itself of a few empty calories and
replace them with baggy clothes.
it tears, shattering droplets 'round porcelain,
and tries to fill itself with
blank plates and empty spoons.
if only it would leave well enough alone,
and let the mind fill itself with something other than fragile purification.
but its grasping fingertips dig in,
sharpened and ready, to
grasp, scratch, and R.I.P.
Author notes
note the R.I.P./rip business :]
2nd draft; there will probably be another one... it keeps growing
Please tell me what you think
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I have never read anything on this subject as well written as this. I suppose we take eating for granted and the plight of others as merely a choice, I see it differently now, thanks for that
best wishes
Peace Muddy
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wow, this is great! your personality & way of writting really shines through! can't wait to hear the next one!!
--gooshawn <3 xoxo
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it's something that takes seconds to read, but is so entertaining and such, that one can not help to read over and over. It's good, and quite grotesque [perhaps that is why i like it so much].
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Short, sweet and too the point. Thank you for sharing this amazing write. I like the fact that it is short, it makes it all the better!!
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Interesting write, are you bilemic. Is that what this is about? Well written though.
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it's more about eating disorders in general, not necessarily bulimia, but you got the idea :]
thanks so much
.:Marie:.
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