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Inner-Hate

Hate is beautiful, hate is kind. (8)
Hate tries too hard to find your mind. (8)
It enables sight, increased might.(8)
Hate to decrease light, increase fright. (8)

A hobby. A body. Something that's inside me. (12)
A shell. A hell. I let hatred dwell. (9)
I can't hide it, but fight it, the hate I feel deep inside (9)
The hate I can feel rip and divide. (9)

Hate that drives me, this insanity. (9)
I cant handle it im panicky. (9)
If you don't believe, come see yourself (9)
you'll lose your life and all human wealth, (9)
I need help. (3)

A hell divided from you, for me, (9)
just alone by myself. It can't be. (9)
A life torn in two, (5)
between me and you, (5)
and you say were through (5)
But I have no clue. (5)

This is not what I intended. (8)
Now this hate cannot be mended. (8)

My mind went snap-(4)
I grabbed your back-(4)
your head went crack- (4)
My mind's off track. (4)

That's how we get here (5)
everything to fear (5)
and a need for a conclusion (8)
to end this abrupt intrusion (8)
All this hate that doesn't belong (8)
but still grows strong (4)
with thoughts of you. (4)

May those who die (4)
let lovers cry (4)
over a loss (4)
up in a toss. 4)
A stuck limbo (4)
nowhere to go (4)
down in the ground. (4)

Six feet under, (4)
Black heart plunder, (4)
Purpose of death; (4)
Red hot fire breath (4)
Up on a cross (4)
Life up in toss. (4)

Useless and aggravated, (7)
leave the world to feel hated, (7)
despised as through my own eyes. (7)
A desecrated wasteland of lies and demise, (12)
a miserable dead end to a life of torment. (12)

Let me repent to the hell below, (9)
for I've got seeds to sew. (6)
Five more a bloody mess, (6)
not settling for anything less. (9)
Still one more to go, (5)
and I fear it's so, (5)
Only one number left (5)
for a final theft (5)
to release a soul (5)
That unholy hole. (5)
The most vicious toll. (5)

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  • Billythekid
    March 19, 2007

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    Oh man that was great. Awesome ryhme and syllable count. I would love to hear this put to music.Great job and I think I will check out more of your stuff.


  • Fragile Chords
    March 19, 2007
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    all you need is love!

    i adore your work, unicorn.

  • babygurl4eva
    March 19, 2007

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    AWESOME!!!!!

    this poem is great. i can hear the emotion just spilling over and your poem really grabs the reader's attention. it's a really powerful piece

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