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Violence Day

Ripped flesh to release the demon, (8)
Victims entrails mix with my own semen. (10)
It seems I'm dreamin (5)
And I can't handle me believin, (8)
I'm raisin haven to set a cravin- (10)
Viscera on the claws of a raven. (10)

Can't fight- (2)
my might (2)
Highlights (2)
the sight (2)
of the tyrant too bold (6)
To stay out of the cold. (6)

I trap the beast (4)
for our final feast, (5)
and then you'll see. (4)
No evil is as evil as me. (9)

I know how it seems (5)
but I cant stop fighting these things, (8)
teeming all over my skin (7)
always burrowing in (6)
like maggots with a bad habit- (8)
An evil jack rabbit, (6)
so violent you cant even grab it- (9)
yer better off just stabbin it, (8)
rippin it apart (5)
More than a little bit. (6)
A violent hissy fit. (6)

I couldn't give a shit (6)
If you jumped in a pit (6)
And all heard was silence. (6)
Never ending violence (6)
inside each one of us. (6)

Violence begets violence (6)
until silence (4)
Inside a shed (4)
so dead (2)
to sight, (2)
more dangerous than a blight (7)
At an extreme height. (5)
41 bodies snug tight, (7)
dissected just right (5)
to enter the feast tonight. (7)

Violent entities (5)
all screaming at me, (5)
open mouthed, no sound (5)
Driving in nails with a sickly pound, (10)
wearing the crown of the king drowned, (8)
now never to be found (6)
6 feet under- (4)
nothing to plunder, (5)
With all vital organs asunder.. (9)

Moloch, demon of my dreams, (7)
eater of small children, (6)
Benefactor of the reap (6)
as he lets the blood seep (7)
past his open maw. (5)
Onlookers look on with a look of awe, (10)
claws long on his outstretched paw. (7)

Horns brightly gleaming, (5)
acid mildly steaming, (7)
waiting and contemplating. (7)
Time has no limit for demons as he, (9)
tall enough to tred through any sea, (9)
but still never as evil as me. (9)

Slit wrists and cut necks, (5)
flesh torn off in flecks (5)
like birds taking pecks. (5)
Smell of decay still strong, (6)
torture seems so long- (5)
tedious and greedy- (6)
I got my treaty (5)
and still im needy. (5)

Carnivore to the last, (6)
moloch in the past, (5)
I am the new breed, (5)
planting my demon seed (6)
on a line drawn by time- (6)
commiting every crime. (6)

M always for murder, (6)
but I think I heard her. (6)
Slice her up I'm damn sure (6)
We will hear the blood purr (6)
Just like a bad cat (5)
with the taste for fat, (5)
and in the right seat (5)
it could be such a treat (6)
watching you squirm (4)
and still never learn (5)
you got no chance for your life's survival (10)
or early revival. (6)
You might as well just be suicidal, (10)
You're damned to be liable. (6)

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  • lolita666
    June 8, 2007

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    your poem is so cool i loved it it was weird and thats why i loved it you are an awesome poet
    Ally


  • Xgeekdreamgonewrong
    April 26, 2007

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    I like it, I really do.
    But what's with the numbers?
    It was weird....
    I like it though.
    Very good
    G/L
    ~Jess