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This is Hell

I feel like a seed
for a demon with greed
who needs to die
or at least get high
enough to fall from the sky
and try to deny the lie
hes been living

torn apart inside
im only here for the ride
mind cant hide
brains denied-
liquefied

this is hell
nowhere to dwell
this is hell
a common cell
this is hell
and im here
but i fear
i cant steer

im gunna crash
and i may lash
out and kill.

dont tempt me kuz i will

alone and helpless,
i feel selfish
wanting what i cant get
but fuck it, im set
i got myself.

i got myself...

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  • brads bena babe
    March 19, 2007
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    hey dis is pretty good i like ur use of words. Very interesing on how u put ur feelings. Good work