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Open-ended Nonsense

Die to die, life in death. Live a lie and lose an eye. Stop your life and move your heart. Breath to breath. Stop to start. Blood to blood. Heart to heart. Blood in the eye ice in the heart. Doesn't matter doesn’t start lose your breath and see a star go left and go oh so far. See the world as is and don't you even miss, take my letter take my right and you will see I have sight. Bide and bide to the tide. Bide and bide to see me die. Open your heart to see what is going on. Open your eyes to see your soul. Black as day bright as night this demand from my sight. Show no fight and we will be alright.

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  • purplebubbles
    March 22, 2007

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    That, made me feel completely empty, and overfull at the same time. So weak and so strong. Its oddly quite good and yet the emotions stirred are sad. I liked it alot....very well done