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everything

everything but the girl
the girl you once knew
the girl who laughed
the girl who lived this life
until i lost

it breaks me up inside
to see yoyu lie
beside


missing you

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  • Parth Sawhney
    August 18
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    ohh..
    its a sad piece and a powerful one..
    very emotional..
    good job!

    take care..
    ur pal,
    Parth

  • Eusebius
    September 30, 2008

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    Bravo

    A brief but quite powerful lover's lament, full of passion...so very poignant! A fine and most deftly done piece of poetry! bravo... bravo...