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...Kingdom?

And this home is my dwelling,
a gold kingdom of such dreadful stars.
Lie down and tell me,
why this color seems so far.

Is there misunderstanding gliding down
the mountain of this stability,
or am I just a little too weak to hear it all.

And this home is my dwelling,
a gold kingdom of such dreadful stars.
I can't help but stare,
until I'm told exactly why,
this color seems so pale.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Muddy Wormwood
    May 8, 2007

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    Dude seriously we're on the same wave length. I can really relate to your style of writting. Of course everything is subjective and I might not get it at all!