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What happend?

What happend to what we had,
Was it ever really real?
Where did it stop being real,
When did it become pretend?
Would you tell me please?
Will you help me see why,
Why we ended like we did?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Andi. gold member
    April 1, 2007
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    beautiful will
    I hope you find your answer one day


  • saseychik0688
    March 19, 2007
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    good write


  • ScarletLetter
    March 19, 2007
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    Shakespeare

    "Parting is such sweet sorrow"


  • Scandalous Beauty
    March 19, 2007

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    This one is very deep. You can't but ask why something so beautiful had to end. You did a great job William.


  • blueyez
    March 19, 2007
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    If people could only be honest enough with themselves to honestly answer these questions Will!

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