My name is Lady Altheia Ordiana Divinae Summers.
*curtseys* I am pleased to meet you and welcome you to my world.
I am a lady of the Unicorn Riders Order and a Skypath Knight.
Protector of the Justice, Honor, Peace, Innocence and the Helpless.
The realm cries out to me and I answer the call.
Together with my unicorn Diamond, we travel the land
in sure of adventure from mountains to seas.
A seasoned world traveler from plain to plain.
I serve my kingdom, country and queen.
Lithe and fast, no one has my speed.
The first woman warrior mage to stand and fight
with a sword, chakrum and bo
and guided by the Bringer of Light.
I can do anything I set my mind at task.
Combining magic with combat is what I do best.
From controlling elements to healing a wound.
On my flute, I can play you a tune.
Grab some Fairy Dust
and I'll tell you a story
of how I'm on my way
to becoming legendary.
The Bringer of Light
called The Unicorn Riders Order and all Skyknights together
for the purpose of discussing his plans.
There is a demonic leader by the name of Jonateau,
who is seeking to destroy all the inhabitants of Taloni,
which is in the country of Heirjah.
Heirjah is a place where friends live in peace.
Where the Sacred Item remains hidden from the rest of the world.
Jonateau is a Dark Warrior
riding a Black Stallion called Pitch.
Dressed in Onyx and Opal,
Jonateau lives only to destroy and crush the Sacred Item.
His black heart has no other purpose.
There is only one bringer of Light,
he is known as the Hero.
No one else can compare,
the rest are zeroes.
Protecting this treasure,
with all of our might.
Otherwise it will be lost,
that just isn't right.
With swords drawn
Lady Altheia and Jonateau square off.
Face to face their eyes meet
glaring into each other's.
Suddenly their swords fall to the ground.
They have crossed paths once again.
Jonateau has lived a life of misery
ever since the day Lady Altheia moved away.
Something in his heart began chipping away
the minute he gazed into her eyes.
The Gods were pleased
as wonderful signs were taking place before them.
Jonateau's shield of Hematite
was now layered in glistening transparant gold.
His sword became clear crystals of majestic beauty
glimmering in perfect hues.
Jonateau stood proud in his place
attired in a robe of white
with pieces of onyx and opal
positioned in perfect order.
Pitch's bridal
became embossed with diamonds, emeralds and rubies.
Lady Altheia presented her right hand palm down
Jonateau bent down upon one knee
placing his forehead upon her hand.
A gesture of the Gods proclaiming friendship.
Sir Jonateau, it is a pleasure,
to get to know you at my leisure.
Come join my quest,
it will put us to the test.
They travlled far and wide
with Sir Jonateau by her side.
Over the rivers and through woods,
he protected her best he could.
Over valleys and mountains,
passed palaces and fountains,
searching for an item so rare
yet for all to share.
Cheers will rise when found
for love will be abound.
Drink from this exquisite chalice,
free from every malice.
Reign of evil, release
to make way for a monarch of peace.
Let it be known throughout the land,
friendship goes hand in hand.
Please tell me what you think
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A most enthralling write of fantasy and fact, enthralling indeed. well done gal .
PIXIE TAG!!
I am a visiting Pixie who has tagged your poem! I enjoyed the visuals you have penned and am soaking in all the enchantment. Now it is YOUR turn to tag another Pixie's poem who is a member of the realm...or two or three or four perhaps?
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I disagree with one of the comments below,
he suggested; that the flow was not there or that
perhaps you should have done rhyme through out...
more structures of poetry especially for fantasy, and
mystical are more suspenseful and imagery revealing for
the reader without it...as this story...like mine...
you are listening to the writers voice telling it...
and this writer has a very lovely and powerful voice...
more rhyming would take away from it's impact and power,
and I love rhyming, soft rhyming gives a poem textures
and layers but if overdone, it takes away from the
message of the poem.
I think you did fabulous with this poem story, we
were really pulled into each line and character,
fascinated and wondering where you were going to take
us!
You stay true to your voice, it is strong and
lovely!
you feast our imaginations and souls!
ears/Seattle
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I love Unicorns and your stories both are legendary.
The mystical is alive and well running about before my eyes and I absolutely love what I see. Hemeoone you bring life in your words. Niaish
Noah
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Wow I don't see a lot of poems that are mystical and magical great job!
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fantasy, fantasy of unrealities. well go ahead and make my day. I enjoyed this, and accept the fact you are very fast in the Queen`s service.
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This was a enjoyable write, very creative and different.It flowed well however i felt that it should hv either been all rhyme or none at all.Otherwise this was wonderful.Best of luck
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You write these so very well - taking the reader on a splendid trip to wonderful places. I like this very much.
Mommy Wolfie
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What a lovely fantasy this is - how we wish we could do this, fly like faries and take part in these mock combats - easy to read and understand what you are saying here. Liked the flow and the make beleieve magic of this poem.
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i really like the last stanza it is my favorite part cant wait to see the rest but it is also good like it is !!!!
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Well this defently reminds me of my Miss Henry the great ^^ love yous MOM!!!
~Your daughter
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I am not done yet guys. This is going to be a much longer poem.
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This was amazing. I loved the Fantasy feel of the poem..not just anyone can write like that
Great job!
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Dear Lady Altheia Ordiana Divinae Summers,
A most entertaining write with nice visuals and expressions, in the second stanza ciuntry, should be country by the way. But yeah, I enjoyed the story and the expressive write.
JD
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