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The same ol story

Echoes of disruption
You vowed not to hurt
Or cause pain
You looked deep into my eyes
And half heartedly
Begged forgiveness

My smile weakened
Tears washed down your face
And my look of disdain
Left nothing but a stain of embarrassment


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  • Twisted Fairy
    March 19, 2007

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    Always is the same ol' story, isn't it? They just never seem to learn, no matter how hard you try to teach them. I liked your ending, it bode well with title.

    Good luck in the contest!