There is dirt on the knees of my jeans
the grass was cold last night
I took off my heels and ran in the field
were your feet cold?
There is no grass in my hair
I brushed it out before my mom saw
the park was full of shadows
in the starlight
Your kiss is just what I always wanted
You are forceful, I can feel you
You pull me to you
I comply
We could only pick out three constellations
The two dippers and orion
Looking up from the ground I watched
Your hands point them out
I remember what your arms feel like warming me
it was too cold to be out at night
soon it will be summer
Will you still kiss me then?
Please tell me what you think
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very sweet enjoyed it
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I feel like I have been there, you paint a beautiful image.
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I feel like I've been in your place...asking this same question... then again... maybe we've all been there. I love this poem because it's something that so many people can relate to.. Great job!! I wouldn't change a thing about it... even though there isn't a rhyme scheme which tends to be my preference..
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This reminds me of my youth and fleeting romance. Young love is so fickle. You did a great job with this. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Erik said it better than I ever could... Awesomely powerful write, my dear
Best wishes to you and your love,
Laura -
For lack of better words, it's so simply beautiful.
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