Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Thoughts on the Conclusion of Hair.

Six people told me I had glitter all over today
I woke up this morning with a flower braided into my ponytail
my eyelashes catching the light, like staring into a starburst so all you can see is beautiful and slightly obscured by the tiny hexagon of glitter in your eyelash.

Last night I stared into the ropes and rows of light behind the big screen, waiting for the last sixteen counts of Izaaks movie so I could place myself on my scaffolding and move my arms around.

Last night I was feeling pretty connected
breathing really hard
sweating really deep.

I plan on showering in about fifteen minutes
and washing off the makeup
thats long since melted off of my skin
pushing away the essence of halter tops without bras and sarong pants
and love and sweat

combing out the giant dreadlock my hair has become
and looking over my shoulder.

I have these necklaces I wore every night
and I feel like they'll remind me of the person I can strive to be
in love, sweaty, happy, warm, breathing hard, dancing breathlessly, whispering sweet nothings
in the middle of the stage.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • acoustical
    March 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    And also, you were gorgeous, and an inspiration of a hippie to us all and I'll miss seeing you braless

    Good job.


  • acoustical
    March 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Knowing how wonderful our show was
    I love how you've decipicted yourself afterward.
    It makes tears come into my eyes
    And i'm not even holding onions.


  • changeisconstant
    March 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    love thisss<3


  • zilbermann silver member
    March 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I like it.