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notes of Love

so many notes
drawn on my body
by such a variety
of people

do not really know
which song I like best
or why

will stay with who
plays me now

A contest entry

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  • MrsPepper
    March 19, 2007
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    Pure Emotion

    All I can say is this is perfectly written...I hope you will win contest...you deserve to. **


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 19, 2007
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    Very good! So strong in it's brevity. I am amazed at the impact this makes and the thought it provokes in me. Man, the notes I have drawn on my body are never ending. Many good and some bad, but they all helped me learn.
    Wonderful write!
    Best to you!


  • MuddyKing
    March 19, 2007
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    you said a lot with so little..reminded me of C,S,N, & Y
    love the one your with
    excellent


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    I think some of my notes are sour, too sharp or too flat. I don't have anyone to duet with. I am afraid I am going solo.


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    wow, this is really deep, love the image of who plays me now...and that all the things that happen on our life are notes written upon us, songs sung upon our very souls...this is really really good.

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