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Thrown the White Flag

I tried with all my might
To make this work
But it seems I won't be leaving without a fight
Because you can't seem to be anything less than a jerk
You have betrayed me for the last time
You have moved in with my ex
And I can't believe you would commit such a crime
Which makes this so much more complex
And it hurts me so much
That I have given up and thrown the white flag

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  • going nowhere
    April 30, 2007

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    sometimes it's easier to just surrender, and save a lot more heartache..sorry you went thorough that.


  • love-laugh-live
    April 29, 2007
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    oh yes poeple can be jerks! i've had bad friendships to! Good luck in the contest!


  • shewalksintomine gold member
    April 4, 2007

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    So if Dido wrote a song that was a complete reversal of "White Flag", this would be it. Guys are bastards.