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Oceanic

Oh no dear do I treasure gold as much as you
As the chest, locked, until all your beauty fills my veins
I say, let your net skim my flesh
For invincible I feel, until you are no longer thoughts
And as flooded as I am…
I’m diving into the ocean, to find my gold.

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  • indomitable
    March 22, 2007

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    lovely.

    im not sure i get the meaning of it, but i really like the style and form. you have a very unique writing style, im off to read more of your great work.