Quietly from my corner
I watch your profile as your heart beats
how your eyes see
I simply watch you, unbelievably, undeniably, enigmatically ~ be
Your gaze assures you see the same ~ in me
watching you
watching me
~ We ~
I know poetry is the meaning of how you love me back, quietly
In this moment ~
we claim, we love, we marry, we multiply in a blink
We can do nothing but together
And in this span of us
we know we silently define what is love
You & I
~ Quietly...
Property Of PikiDammit.inc 2003
Author notes
"POETIC MOVEMENT"
A contest entry
- NEO SOUL: POETIC MOVEMENT PT. 2 by cgirl0410.
400 points, ended March 20, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOOO! This was tight!!!!!
This was sooo unique and in a level that I want to be on. You did a great job and I can see whay this was a winner! Keep Writing! And thanks again for commenting!!
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To Beautiful....
i know poetry is the meaning of how you love me back quietly this moment we claim we love we marry we multiply in a blink. this stole me dear this was so poetic i enjoyed it. -
Beautiful
I love it, well written, It made me feel the emotions of the writers. Thanks for sharing. -
All I Got To Say Is....
This was obviously the WINNER!
Gr8 job!
Ephiphany
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oh this gives me a certain kind of calmness its so beautiful and serene I love this write.... thank you for sharing this you deserve the gold!
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awesome! amazing compsotion and brilliant!truly. thanks for sharing
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Thank you so much! I am appreciative of finding this particular contest, for I was ready to lead "Quietly" out to pasture. Thank You for giving it a new home here good people.. Thank You for the win!! I would love to try at this again, it was a pleasure!
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Wow. I'm speechless from this piece. This exactly the type of piece I was looking for. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest.
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Why thank you for the read, and for allowing me to take part.. The contest caught my eye immediately..
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