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Good Bye

Hittin' hard
Fadin' fast
Heart scarred
Evading past

Getting away
Hating Living
Life astray
Always forgiving

You're Gone
I'm elated
New dawn
Long awaited

Good bye

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  • slipperssun gold member
    April 3, 2007

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    letting the past go can be a challenge to us all... fantastic write that you have penned for the title.
    cheers
    Jen


  • Child of an Angel
    March 19, 2007
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    Wink This is a great write and a wonderful way to let go of things in your past. Wonderful job and about time you got one of these title challenges done lol.  I am proud of you :P Well nice short and simple yet pwoerful and understandable. Great Job Dave and KEep penning ok!

    Always

    Emily 


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 19, 2007
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    very simple but quick to the point of how many feel.


  • Elizabeth883
    March 19, 2007
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    Simple n to the point- its perfect