The moment all is clear again,
When life makes sense and you might win;
The very moment hope is born-
Hope to heal what is bent and torn.
Find someone on whom you depend.
Face life's challenges with a grin.
Don't let your patience wear too thin.
No reason to feel so forlorn.
All is clear again...
Being happy is not a sin.
Don't let things get under your skin.
Focus on goals, yet to be born.
This gives you reason not to mourn.
Just when life throws you a fast spin-
All is clear again...
Author notes
This is written in Rondeau Form.
This piece was inspired by the 1st picture...
In a list
A contest entry
- It's all about the mystery, life is! by S2ndQueen.
450 points, ended April 20, 2007, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think... I appreciate your feedback!
Comments
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I am very impressed by this piece, for content as well as rythm! I find it very hard to enjoy pieces written in odd forms becasue they always cme out as so forced! This exceeds all expectations of mine! This is beautiful! And an inspiring piece as well! thank you for entering!
S2
The Queen
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OH You have no idea how i NEEDED to hear these words today....ty ty ty a million miles over....
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Very Good
I like the thought of this
I wish it is all true for you
You remind me of thousands of women who work to win each day
Always I wish you well
The opening words are lovely
Rick -
"All is clear again". This is more lovely than anything I ever read by dear Abby. You must find time to write more, "Dreamy Green Eyes". That is lovely! A brilliant moniker. Best Wishes. I found your name on the list, and it caught my attention.
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Stunning...
Love the image, love the words...IMAGES AND WORDS! *smile*
Obviously you have immense talent. I do hope in the rare occasions I am in AP I can read some of your works.
Peace!
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Thanks for your wonderful comments! I hope that you will get the chance to read some more of my works... I enjoy hearing feedback... always room for improvement!
Thanks again for your support! 
Debi
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Very welcome. *smile*
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huzzah?
And just to be clear, which poem is this entered for? 1, 2, or 3?
Thanks and Good Luck!
S2
The Queen -
Very Good
Soft rhyme
Great theam, love the optimisum
Rick
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