I see him
His dark piercing eyes
His gentle smile
And the caress of love noone else can give...
My darling my dearest I gave up at will
Dark hair and kiss of sweet desire
stronger then I could ever be
He holds me up when without care I may slip
Without him I would fall oh so quick
With another step over the edge into abyss...
His gentle words of comfort
His loving way to scold
The way he holds my hand when I feel alone
I am so stuck on him...
The way he plays guitar and writes lyrics to me
When he laughs and gets so nervous I get giggly
With out my only one I dont know where I would be...
How he completes me in every way
All he has to call and it makes my day
Im not completely sure if he knows how I feel
All he knows is I love him he knows its real
His georgeous smile and generous ways
His random hugs and flirty games
The way we kiss and the way we fight...
How he always comes back to make things right
My Darling...My only one...My enfatuation
You have completly completed me...
You are my one and only muse...
**To my darling and my sweets ~Chris...(aka) Acronym**
**because you never let me down and when I fall you are
always there to gently pick me up and brush me off again**
I love you sweets<3
A contest entry
- Show Me your Muse by perfect relief.
550 points, ended April 7, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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You are such a beautiful person to him. I can tell he really loves you and that you really love him. Lol. You two are cute in a goth and emo sort of way.-no offense- It's okay, I have a relationship like that so I understand alot of this. Lol. Nonetheless, your writing is awesome and never stop being so awesome. Lol. You both are gorgeous!!
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This is oh so sweet. I can definitely connect well with this piece because I know the feeling well. And eerily enough my one and only is named Chris too...Kudos to you and him.
However, sometimes your rhyme scheme seems forced. I like the fact that you want to use rhyme; in fact, it is something that I adore in poetry...when it is used correctly. It's a nice thought though.
Thank you for the entry, and good luck, in the contest and in your endeavors in love!
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Oh my gosh..that was amazing...I have no idea what to say..I'm totally speachless darling! You left me hanging and I have no way to come back from this..This was way too good, alot better than anything I could ever write for you...at least in my opinion. I loved all of this.
I love you
Chris
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