whisper in my ear
tell me something I really want to hear
3 little words
I hate you
you haven't said it quite enough have you?
over and over
kill me
shoot me
bang bang
I'm dead
nice job
there's the proof you never really cared anyway
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- whatever the fuck you want III by Nam.
345 points, ended March 29, 2007, 23 entries
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Funny, but I have sort of wanted someone to say those words to me.
Just to make "letting go" seem a little less than impossible.
I have even wanted her to impale my real heart to still its restless incessant beating as well.
