Counting minutes as time speeds by-
Waiting to die.
Devoid of hope...
Afraid to cope.
Pining away over lost love-
That perfect love.
Remembering-
and regretting.
Finding a way to start again-
Risk pain again.
Love hurts too much
to be a crutch.
Author notes
This is written in the Minute Poetry Form.
A contest entry
- Give me emotion by LaLaLie.
360 points, ended April 14, 2007, 116 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think... I appreciate your comments!
Comments
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Thank you for entering and good luck.
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I love short writes and this was extremely beautiul...
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Southeast Texas Women
Really know how to put their thoughts down on paper, or at least you do. As a man from the same area, I find that refreshing. I really enjoyd the read. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Very Good
I am trusting this is not true
The words are very well said
I think many will relate to this
Rick
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