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Looking into a Lie

When I look into your eyes
I wonder what you're in it for
It could be attention
Or maybe you've realized that
I'll be more successful than you

And it breaks you apart

Whatever it is
I won't believe for one second
That it's love
Let alone any sense of
Friendship

This will never be the same

Please tell me what you think

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  • 245Trioxin
    March 18, 2007
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    Without love you can have neither. Looking into someones eyes, seeing what they see...superficiality. I'm not trying to be poetic, some people just go from opaque to translucent to transparent. Everything stems from within' the eyes.


  • Twilight4Eternity
    March 18, 2007
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    You say so much in so little words. Way to expose a lie. good job.