A girl struggling to get the bond off of her wrist
but an invisible bond is almost impossible to get off
still she struggles with unending strength
the master laughs an evil laugh at her and says
never underestimate my powers girl
she cries because the bond is hurting her
the blue light shinning burns with heat
hurts so bad it could brake her wrist
the harder she tries the more hurt she gets
she is a slave forever and if not more than that
she is but a girl struggling forever into eternity
just to get the bond off of her little wrist.
A contest entry
- Fantasy Contest - Pic Inspirations - Ages 13 and Under ONLY by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended March 25, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very deep and dark, great flow and love the imagery, I can see the bonds on her wrist, emotions run deep Congrads on the bronze
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Pretty interesting write.
Rallty paint a vivid picture with your words, I could envision the whole scene.
-cheers
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This is a very different piece. You have written some rather unique poetry upon this page here. This, as leander stated, can have deeper meaning. In fact it can have a variety of meanings depending on the reader themself which is the wonderful thing about poetry. Nicely Done!
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This poem sounds like it has a way much deeper meaning to it than what it actually shows... this invisible bond can be seen as the bond between family for example... or husband and wife, where the male unfortunately doesn't treat the female good
Well written
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Quite an interesting take on the image. I must say I do like how you've let your imagination go with this. Beautifully done.
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WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
Nicely penned. I like your interpretation of this picture. Well done and good luck to you with this.
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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good
I think it was great!!!! -
nice.nice
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