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Snow White Twist

mirror mirror on the walls
who's the fairest of them all
you are you are it says
all day and all night
looks into the mirror
disturbed by no one
"whoever does I shall smite"

mirror mirror
day to day
I hope you don't change what you have to say
I'm the most beautiful in the land
no one is fairer if you say so it's your head I demand

but one day
mirror mirror I say
you are but one beautiful lady now you see
"the fairest can't be anyone but me!"
shattering screams throughout the hall
none prepared for what's ahead
I scream so long I scream myself dead

Author notes

I was thinking of a twist for Snow White, I know it's not a happy ending really but..oh well



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  • Sahlili20
    March 27, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest!--Sahlili20


  • Angierie
    March 18, 2007
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    Happy endings are over rated..lol

    Great write!!

    Angie