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Red Ribbon

You left me here
Ribbon in hand
Denying the friendship once so strong.

Fluttering in the wind
That small red ribbon
Nothing but a trinket.

But did you know-
Sakura, did you care
That you were my only friend?

Did you realize
That your clumsiness
Always cheered me up?

To think that one boy
Could fire your jealousy
Who said that crushes were a game?

But you never had enough
You couldn't be content
You had to be his one and only.

I laugh at your foolishness
How you were so confident
I moved on from him long ago.

But how you cut me, Sakura
How your kunai hit my heart.
You were the one I opened up to
The only one I called a friend.

Worn red ribbon
What do you think?
Was I wrong about Haruno?

Goodbye, tomodachi
You've asked to be my enemy
And how can I deny it?

This tear that now streaks
Down my paled cheek
It's all thanks to you, red ribbon.

Alone is what I am
So here I shall stand
Red ribbon in my hand.


Author notes

inspired by ino's piece "sakura's hate"

now, if anyone asks if this is sakuino, I will steal temari's fan and whack you upside the head.

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  • a means to an end
    June 7, 2007

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    this is so sad. this is truely a different point i've never heard from ino. she always picks on sakura's weakest point. she hates her forehead yet she mocks her for it. this was a brilliant piece. great write


  • Chibi-chan
    March 19, 2007

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    Love the poem!! Good job, Naruto obsesser!! Talked to SITW, she admits you're obsessed...nyah!!


    • Artemis Gem
      March 19, 2007
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      I am goign to figuratively kill both of you >.< Of course I wouldn't really kill you, considering you two are like my bestest friends in the world. you obsess over naruto way more than me. this was random inspiration from ino chan's poem. Sorry, just the obsession thing seriously ticks me off. After my pokemon phase-well, I shouldn't have to explain. I think you get it.

      pegleg


  • Sinned Alchemist
    March 19, 2007

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    ~steals temaris fan before you can~
    wow. i inspired someone,i dont do that very often.very good megumi
    ~hits you with the closed fan~

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