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A song of the sea

A song of the sea
the waves lifting a soft note  
is natures music
Crashing of the ebb and flow
playing a song of the sea

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Tanka

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  • Samplette gold member
    March 18, 2007
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    A wonderfully written tanka. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam