I awake to darkness
black as a moonless night
I wonder how I got here
and raise my head
I am laying prone
the cool wind kissing my skin
I shiver in response and realize
that I am naked
Wondering how and why
I struggle to sit up
my arms are bound to the bed
as well as my feet
I struggle and swear
panic rushing to the fore
Hands run down my body
I jump in response
They hold me down and continue to caress
Realizing the fight is useless
I give in to the caress and the pleasure
Pain in my thigh
suckling the tender flesh
I moan in ecstasy as the pain brings a new pleasure
My groin responds and harden as the sensation takes hold
Another bite to my thigh, opposite side
I wonder, fleetingly, if they know just how to pleasure me
Hand reaches my manhood
One stroke... two
combined with the bites,
I reach the edge,
three strokes... four
I whimper in the sensation
Five strokes,
and I explode in pleasure
over and over, never stopping
til I am oversensitized
Then I lay while the aftershocks
ripple over and over
And I bask in the pleasure within the darkness
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very well done
well done loved the wording as the story trikled on, bring us all deeper to this darker unknown pleasure of yours. The imagery caught in the midst of such longing, well done indeed your poetry is coming along vey well I am proud of you. -
this was well written. it explained a passion and lust not seen.
making every reader im sure to feel like that person.
i know i did.
it was reallygood,a nd u should keep writing. -
*chuckles* pleasure in darkness truely a title worthy for this poem... i loved how it flowed
Great write
~choaticros -
wow.... too bad there was no blood trickling in there from the bites. would think you had a sucubus on your hands! lol or something of the like. very cool.
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