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Puppy-dog Eyes

Ok, so I didn't know
It was one of a pair
That you were going to wear
That evening

I didn't mean to make a hole
In the silver toe
Please don't throw
Me in the kennel

If I had a bit of a warning
I wouldn't chew
That silver shoe
You would have worn

If I had a chewy toy
I could sink my teeth into
Not so much a pretty shoe
I wouldn't be told off

Do I hear some sarcasm
Please forgive me
You know you love me
With my sad puppy dog eyes

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please do not mention my name, this is blind judging, thankyou all XxX

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  • poetryality silver member
    March 20, 2007

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    Minor typo here; "Yhat evening" [That]

    It's funny (not ha ha) that you wrote from the picture. That it became your inspiration. You did that well. I feel the shamefacedness in your words. Excellent!

    Thanks for the time spent to enter my challenge. I wish you all the best.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • The Poetic Angel
    March 19, 2007

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    great write very cute love the title the whole poem was sweet i can just see the dog in my mind...by the way line 4 a lil typo..."Yhat" shud it be "that" sorry to point it out ..good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx


  • stevens5613
    March 18, 2007

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    well a very imaginative and amazing poem that suites you to a peice of cake lol. hope all goes well int he contest
    love
    chris
    XXxxXXxx