Why is life so uncontrollable,
&& why do I have to be the one--
whos thrown down in the dirt
beaten and abused
sexually and psyhically
all I am is used
But I'll never unders
[[why i'm the one to hurt]]
Why can't I be Someone greater than I
&& Why can't I have a greater purpose than a [[Sex Toy]]
A contest entry
- Dark and Depressing...Please enter by XHollowXEyesX.
700 points, ended April 6, 2007, 119 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow. for how short this is, it has so much impact and emotion in it. I can really see this piece being extended into an awesome song or poem. I love how you styled the write and kept it to the point.
great work, thanks for entering and goodluck. -
Arw *picks you up again*
hope you're ok x
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awww, dont feel that way. love yoo!!!
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I actually really love this piece.... simple yet very deep.
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