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Wounded, Jaded.

Wounded,
Jaded,
Caught in the Abyss.
A butterfly pinned in a frame.
A bird stuck in a cage.
I only exist.
Everything,
Nothing,
I just am.

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  • McFairy
    March 19, 2007

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    Oh sweetie, you are so much more than that, you have attitude, confidence, a beautiful child and a huge heart, your little one adores you and bet you dont just exist to her, and yourself are a beautiful girl, this time will pass, as the other times do, just hold in there and prove how strong you are, you know how strong you are, it's only people around you that make you doubt yourself, YOU ARE AMAZING!!!

    ***Strangeangel***


  • coolmommy
    March 18, 2007
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    wow

    this was great! I really like it! So little words but so powerful in meaning. I like the border too. hee. Keep up with writing. sorry for not reading all of your new ones! but yeah, bravo on this! i like teh rhyming too.


  • Layla Thomas
    March 18, 2007
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    I love this!