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Bleeding on the Inside

Wounds bleeding on the inside,
Tears streaming on the outside.
Heart shattered and crushed.
Baby Girl looks up and sees Mommy cry,
Tells her, "Mommy, it'll be ok."
Shattered and torn, dying.
No one hears.
She hides her tears.
Wounds bleeding on the inside,
Nothing left on the outside.

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  • McFairy
    March 19, 2007

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    Breaking my heart

    You are breaking my heart, your little girl is absolutely gorgeous, and she takes that after you, you are beautiful, and just because some twat (sorry to be offensive towards him, if this offends you delete the message, I will understand) good not see the goodness in you, your spirit, your light and the amount of love you have to give, well he is most definitely not worth it. Again with my cliche "Time heals all wounds" and it really does, even if you dont think so for the time, if you really are struggling with a depression at the moment, speak to your doctor and get him to put you on mild antidepressants, I used Cilift, not too sure if you get it there, they are not addictive, and they're not like happy pills, they just make life simpler and I found I wanted to work, my work increased unbelievably, and I used to dread going in, also kind of numbs you for a while and if it's just a short case of depression, you'll probably only need it for about 3 - 6 months.


    ***Strangeangel***

    • TwilightsChild
      March 19, 2007
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      i was on antidepressants b/c i do suffer from a moderate case of major depression but its all good...i'm finding my fight again...so thanks so much for the kind words...i just felt crappy b/c of some things that had happened with the guy...but he and i are still friends so its all good...


  • coolmommy
    March 18, 2007
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    awww

    this is a very good one too. i know how you feel, i feel the same. emotional poem. hits home.