Thoughts of her are
like a magical song,
drifting through my soul,
soft and long.
Cascading notes
in my heart not ears,
brandishing all and any
doubts or fears.
No unruley,ghastly,
hip-hop riffs,
just classical waves
reeling off the Dover cliffs.
A contest entry
- One Day Duel by MuddyKing.
300 points, ended March 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I enjoyed this write. Thank you for posting it. God bless you always in all that you do. You are forever in my prayers. Have a blessed day.
In Christ Jesus,
Tabitha Robin
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Wow that was amazing you have the imagery and the softness of song along with perfect rhymes and real emotion excellently written
Bravo
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excellent imagery
very soft but the direct message came through
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now that was awesome ... i love the way you have written with your eyes as well as your words. imagery works well for me
cheers
Jen
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Wow.. great great job!
I love the imagery!
Angie
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